Patrick this is a good effort but really, I wanted you to write about the four scripts you had chosen using the headings I gave you. For instance, Is An Unexpected Journey multi stranded? Whose perspective is it written from? Also, your slide on Language seems to have a description of computer script?? Please reformat your presentation so that you are writing about the specific examples you've chosen in a bit more detail.
Hi Patrick - still waiting for you to improve this. I can't sign off the unit until you have and it's the only outstanding piece of work.. Also, there should now be link lists showing where to find all of the components of this unit. You need to get this done before we come back to school, otherwise I'll have to keep you in at lunchtime to get it done!
Patrick this is a good effort but really, I wanted you to write about the four scripts you had chosen using the headings I gave you. For instance, Is An Unexpected Journey multi stranded? Whose perspective is it written from?
ReplyDeleteAlso, your slide on Language seems to have a description of computer script??
Please reformat your presentation so that you are writing about the specific examples you've chosen in a bit more detail.
Patrick it's not clear whether you've acted on the above feedback, please can you make the above improvements so that this work will pass.
ReplyDeletePatrick I'm still waiting for you to improve this piece of work - without this piece of work passing, you can't pass the unit.
ReplyDeleteHi Patrick - still waiting for you to improve this. I can't sign off the unit until you have and it's the only outstanding piece of work..
ReplyDeleteAlso, there should now be link lists showing where to find all of the components of this unit. You need to get this done before we come back to school, otherwise I'll have to keep you in at lunchtime to get it done!