Idea 1 -
-Title - TBC (Live for the weekend)
-Running time - no longer than 10 minutes
-Genre - Drama
-Target Audience - Teens: 15-19
-LogLine - Your biggest downfall is yourself
Potensial Cast:
-Main Character - Ellena Quarmby (Good actor and has experience)
-Group of friends - TBC, teens of ages around 17, 18
-Teacher - Mr Hansen (Drama teacher - used to be an actor)
-Parent - TBC
Order of events-
- End of a school day (Friday) A girl called Chloe gets asked by friends to come out tonight, nothing out of the ordinary
- They go to a party that night. The girl gets drunk and has a fun time
-All her friends ask if she wants to go out again next week. She doesn't want to but goes because she's pressed into it
-The next week she tries a pill that her friend has. She enjoys it and has a great night
- Skip to the next day. She asks everyone this this to go out. Her friend brings more pills. She overdoses and ends up getting hit by a car and dies
Plot Points -
- Girl goes to a party and has a fun time
-She goes out again next week and tries a pill
-The next nigh she goes out again, overdoses and is killed by a car
Character Profile -
Appearance:Teenage Girl 16/17 blonde hair
Personality:
Likes to fit in with the crowd and will always try to fit in
Key Features:
Will give up school for her friends
Role and contribution:
The character that crumbles because she gives in to peer pressure and trying to appear cool
Detailed Story:
A young girl who's group of friends are growing up a lot faster than he is ready for. She has grown up with only her father. Her mother died of cancer three years ago. Her father wants to love her more but struggles to get her affection. She goes out to relive the stress and relax. She goes out the first night to a house party. Here we as the audience discover her characterisation as it is exposed and we see the sort of person she is. The next weekend when she goes out again we see her fatal flaw of easily giving into peer pressure and trying to seem cool amongst her friends. The next day she is the one who asks to go out. Her nature of wanting to fit in is getting the better of her. She goes to the moor with the characters Joe and Austin and takes another pill. She overdoses on the pills and runs onto the road. She is then run over, her life ends because of trying to be cool and living under stress with only one parent.
Idea 2 -
Title:
Running Time: No longer than 10 minutes
Genre: Thriller
Target Audience: 15 and above
LogLine: Keeps your brothers close, but your enemies closer
Potensial Cast:
Four Soldiers,
A group of enemy soldiers
Order of Events:
- Soldiers out on patrol
- A gun shot is fired, one soldier dies
- They are pinned down
- Run out of ammunition
- They all end up dying trying to fight the enemy
Plot Points:
- They are pinned down and can't see the enemy
-They run out of ammo and hold fire
Character Profiles:
Soldiers- All good friends, different characters. Funny one, main character on the mission, and the radio man. Forth dies before we get to know him
Soldier Backgrounds:
All of the soldiers have been set out on patrol. In the base every day the role of patrol changes between the privates. Alongside each patrol group is a commanding officer who gives orders to them and keeps the soldiers in line. Its just a normal day as the troop set out on their patrol, soon they find out things are going wrong when the radio fails as the base tried to contact them. One of the soldiers who is holding the radio keeps trying to make contact with the base but it's distorted and keeps failing. The men are tired from the long war they have been fighting against the rebels. The war has been going on for 10 years. There's been fighting in deserts, jungles and forests but now the battalion have been assigned to fight in the swamps and moor land. The rebels have been hiding and making camps near the base so the patrol is scouting out for any movement - but they are not ready for the ambush that they face.
Detailed Story:
The very end of a film, a group of 3 army soldiers are pinned down by enemy fire. They are ultimately going to die. Their radios are down, they are running low on ammunition, there is no escape. In the end when they realise the end is near, they hold fire and sit it out behind the wall they are hiding behind. They each share stories of the times they had with each other, and remember about what they've been through. They stay with each other until the end. The main character is the last to survive and we have a shot of him lying on the ground, breathing out, looking up to the sky, accepting his fate.
Both of these ideas have potential Patrick but there are a few problems with both of them:
ReplyDeleteIdea 1: It would be very challenging to show the downfall of a character in the space of 10 minutes, there may be too much plot for a short film. It might be better to focus on an event that marks the beginning of his downfall.
Idea 2: I like this idea because it is about a big event told from the perspective of a small group of characters. However, props/costume will be very challenging. Also, it would be good to know more about the situation the characters are in - you should try to work out the scenario they are in so it's not just a generic war.
...also, there should be scanned mind maps to accompany these developed ideas Patrick.
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